In my opinion, this is one of the most decent responses I gave. After reading my classmate's cool story about horseshoes, I gave her a peer review page. I feel like I was really able to connect and relate to this person's essay. My feelings were expressed as I told her, "...your use of sensory images really made it believable and I wanted to keep reading." I really liked that her paper caught my interest and actually made me want to read more. I explained to her that I liked her introduction and I thought it flowed well into the body of her story. I think that my review was good because I gave her a lot of positive feedback and constructive criticism, which can go a long way. I don't know how she felt about the response, but I hope she enjoyed what I had to say. I told her she could have integrated her sources more, but that other than that, everything else looked great. I'm a pretty picky reader, and I can usually spot mistakes and errors, it was really cool for me to have read an essay that challenged me. I think that it provoked a cool sense of sensory detail in me, and I had a lot of good things to say about it.
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